I really admire your work and it is an honor for you to share this with me. This would be some great memories for you to read when u hit your senior citizen status.... Keep on entering your words and let the lord guide you through lifes journey's and have you continue to let the world know about them in your gift of words and poetry
My Life is so empty
i see no purpose
i talk with no meaning
i walk with no destination
i see with no vision
i hear with no sound
my life is so empty
People "love Me" yet i feel alone
people hug me yet i feel "cold"
people kiss me yet i feel unwanted
people hate me yet i feel envied
people look at me yet i feel invisable
my life is so empty
to you this may seem stupid
to you this may seem smart
to you this may seem funny
to you this may seem.............................................
HEY WOULD YOU NOTICE IF I DRIFT AWAY
i this is how i felt a year and a half ago and no joke right after i wrote this poem i didnt feel like that any more i said to my self F^ck Every one and i started contrating on my self soon after i had more fiends than i wanted....lol i just thought anyone who may feel like that, they should know that expressing ur self to the fullest and not lettin any one tell you who you are.......... wel thank for reading and remember pay it forward :)
Thank you for sharing that with me and the other readers. Hopefully, everyone finds their own outlet of expression and is able to see themselves subjectively.
Thanks guys, like i say you could never go wrong when you do things from the heart. i just hope more people would open up more then this world
wouldn't be so hostile.
Simply exquisite........
Yusef,
I really admire your work and it is an honor for you to share this with me. This would be some great memories for you to read when u hit your senior citizen status.... Keep on entering your words and let the lord guide you through lifes journey's and have you continue to let the world know about them in your gift of words and poetry
Coming from a fellow poet, that means a lot.
It's been a pleasure working with you and being your friend. stay blessed
Yusef,
This poem is great, I really like it.
Yusef, I've always admired you as a person and artist. Great Poem. Keep up the good work. Tu amiguito
DRIFT AWAY
My Life is so empty
i see no purpose
i talk with no meaning
i walk with no destination
i see with no vision
i hear with no sound
my life is so empty
People "love Me" yet i feel alone
people hug me yet i feel "cold"
people kiss me yet i feel unwanted
people hate me yet i feel envied
people look at me yet i feel invisable
my life is so empty
to you this may seem stupid
to you this may seem smart
to you this may seem funny
to you this may seem.............................................
HEY WOULD YOU NOTICE IF I DRIFT AWAY
i this is how i felt a year and a half ago and no joke right after i wrote this poem i didnt feel like that any more i said to my self F^ck Every one and i started contrating on my self soon after i had more fiends than i wanted....lol i just thought anyone who may feel like that, they should know that expressing ur self to the fullest and not lettin any one tell you who you are.......... wel thank for reading and remember pay it forward :)
Ed,
Thank you for sharing that with me and the other readers. Hopefully, everyone finds their own outlet of expression and is able to see themselves subjectively.
Nice poem Ed, thanks for sharing that, there is a lot of meaning there. Its tight.
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Thanks guys, like i say you could never go wrong when you do things from the heart. i just hope more people would open up more then this world
wouldn't be so hostile.